my 1st poems ever

hallo.... ich weiß nich, wie gut meine gedichte sind, sind die ersten die ich je geschrieben hab (konnt mich inner schule immer davor drücken :) ) ) naja, ich hoff mal sie gefallen, auch wenn sie nich so allgemein gehalten sind, alle auf die selbe person, die mir immernoch so wichtig ist, bezogen.

das aller erste:

Thoughts of a crying heart

5 weeks ago the best time of life finished

4 weeks ago you broke up with me

it hurt me so much

blind cause of the pain

I did a big mistake

When I did it

I didn’t knew

My acting was wrong

But a short time later

I saw what I had done

I hurt you

I endanger your frindship

To your best friends

Our future

And I lost your love

I hate myself

For what I have done

I want

To change what I have done

But I cant

I learned

From the mistake

But I don’t know

If I can ever show you

Because you don’t love me anymore

But I still love you

With all my heart and soul

I will always do

Even u cant

Give me back that love

You were my first girlfriend

You are the greates person

I have even known

It makes me so infinite sad

Never to hold you in my arms again

You just did

So beautiful things to me

You showed me

What real love is

And I payed it back with pain

The best time of my life

Was the time

I spend with you

The greatest feelings I have ever felt

Were based on you

If I had a wish

There is just one thing

I would wish

To win your heart back

And be together with you again

I hope you know

I never meant to hurt you

And that I´m really sorry

For what I have done

I miss you and your love

The last I want to say

Is that my love

Will always be there

Its more strong

As anytime before

We couldn’t talk much

In the last time

And I miss you

My heart is crying

In every minute I´m away from you

Without you

I´m not the same person as before

I lost the most important

Part of my life

But I know its my fault

I still hope

One day I can tell you

“I love you!”

but till that day

I´m not compleat

I would like to say

“please come back to me”

but I don’t have the rights

to do that

its up to you

M....., I will always love you with all my heart and soul!!!

so, mein zweiter versuch:

My heart is crying

Since you went away

I feel a part of me dying

Every single day

I miss you so much

My love still is real

I don’t know what to do

I want u to know how I feel

I miss to look into your eyes

I miss to feel your lips

I miss to hear your voice

I miss to hold you close

I miss to feel your breath

I miss to hear your laugh

I miss so much to receive your love

What hurts me most

Is the fact

I don’t know

What is in your mind

If you can give

Me, us, an other chance

Or if all the great times we shared wont come back again

All I want for future

Is o be together with you

My love for you will always be

And I pray you can love me again too

nummer 4: (da bin ich mit der reihenfolge ein wenig durcheinander gekommen :rolleyes: )

My tears dont dry

Cause I can´t stop to cry

Myheart is broken

Cause of ther words were spoken

My mind is not clear

I feel so much the fear

I lost the greatest person I´ve ever known

I miss so much the love you´ve shown

Without you, I´m not the same

Oh, what a cruel game

I don’t know what to do

All I need is you

To live without what I need

Makes it difficult to keep staying on my feet

I don’t know, if u feel the same pian I do

At the moment I feel like I don’t know anything about you

I guess, it´s time to face the truth

I lost your love

That’s why my heart is crying

And my soul is dying

The only thing which will survive is my love for you!

naja, hier jetzt nr 3:

The people say, you´re not good for me

Cause you hurt me so much, so often

But they don’t feel like I do

This infinite love, which I can´t deny

All the tears I cried cause of you

Showed me, how much I need you

All the pieces of my broken heart

Show me how much I still love you

In any minute of a day I don’t think of you

I think about the time we shared

I think about our love

And about, what I should do without you

The sense of a life

Is to find the true love

I already found you, my true love

So, now life is senseless without you

Once I heard someone say

“love is the greatest feeling

but also the reason for the greatest pain”

now I can say, he was right

I miss your love

I hate the pain

I hope you feel better

As I do in this times

yeah yeah englisch rock =)

*flüster sind da nicht paar fehler? ?(

joa... könnte sein dass da son paar fehler drin sind.... grammatik war nie meine stärke :(

das ist ja auch nicht wichtig ;)

sind schön geschrieben... :super:

danke :) )